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Re: The Sky-Whale
Lol. Great poem!
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Re: I wish
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Aug 5, 2022
We wish love were as easy and right as it is so often written and imagined.Some things are to be kept.Some are to be let go.We aren’t responsible for our ... -
Re: I wish
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Aug 5, 2022
We wish love were as easy and right as it is so often written and imagined.Some things are to be kept.Some are to be let go.We aren’t responsible for our ... -
Re: If the entire sun burned out of the sky (when) would you know?
Alright.I will try that.
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Re: Maisie & Mallory’s demise
At the last part where Mallory is speaking to Heather,Heather and her older sister May were out for a day.This was before Heather and Loraine became friends.Mallory and Heather were ...
Jul 26, 2022 -
Re: Maisie & Mallory’s demise
The entire family will need a therapist after this.
Jul 26, 2022 -
Re: Maisie & Mallory’s demise
Thank you so much for reading! I edited that sentence. Yes,Mallory is strange isn%u2019t she?
Jul 26, 2022 -
Re: It’s all a bit tragic isn’t it?
I should also point out that Maisie used to beat him with a baseball bat,resulting in him forgetting certain things.When she turned twelve she switched to a broom because she ...
Jul 24, 2022 -
Re: It’s all a bit tragic isn’t it?
He is speaking to both friends in that dialogue. When I say his bones are sticking out,I%u2019m saying he%u2019s gaunt.Sickly thin. Thank you for reading!
Jul 24, 2022 -
Re: The clown and the little girl:Part two
Thanks for your review! I have intended for her name to be spelled with one r.
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Re: What love feels like
You%u2019re very welcome.
Jul 11, 2022 -
Re: and so what if we have some cracks
You%u2019re welcome.
Jul 7, 2022 -
Re: and so what if we have some cracks
The thing I specifically liked in the poem was you mentioning the human details.Like for example %u201CSometimes your lips are bit too chapped.%u201D But then you mention something positive about ...
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Re: I Don’t Want To Let It Burn In The City Lights
You%u2019re welcome! You too.
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Re: carousel
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Jun 30, 2022
Snow White was beautiful but lonely.She was kind-hearted but scared.She was young but worrisome.Nothing is as it seems.The Princess doesn’t have a perfect life.The castle isn’t always a paradise o
