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Wall of all things marvelous and malevolent

  • Poetry » Fantasy, Technology Re: The Sky-Whale

    Lol. Great poem!

    Aug 7, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: I wish

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    We wish love were as easy and right as it is so often written and imagined.Some things are to be kept.Some are to be let go.We aren’t responsible for our ...

    Aug 5, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: I wish

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    We wish love were as easy and right as it is so often written and imagined.Some things are to be kept.Some are to be let go.We aren’t responsible for our ...

    Aug 5, 2022
  • Poetry » Science, Mystery / Suspense Re: If the entire sun burned out of the sky (when) would you know?

    Alright.I will try that.

    Jul 30, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Maisie & Mallory’s demise

    At the last part where Mallory is speaking to Heather,Heather and her older sister May were out for a day.This was before Heather and Loraine became friends.Mallory and Heather were ...

    Jul 26, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Maisie & Mallory’s demise

    The entire family will need a therapist after this.

    Jul 26, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Maisie & Mallory’s demise

    Thank you so much for reading! I edited that sentence. Yes,Mallory is strange isn%u2019t she?

    Jul 26, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: It’s all a bit tragic isn’t it?

    I should also point out that Maisie used to beat him with a baseball bat,resulting in him forgetting certain things.When she turned twelve she switched to a broom because she ...

    Jul 24, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: It’s all a bit tragic isn’t it?

    He is speaking to both friends in that dialogue. When I say his bones are sticking out,I%u2019m saying he%u2019s gaunt.Sickly thin. Thank you for reading!

    Jul 24, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: The clown and the little girl:Part two

    Thanks for your review! I have intended for her name to be spelled with one r.

    Jul 23, 2022
  • Poetry » Humor, Romantic Re: What love feels like

    You%u2019re very welcome.

    Jul 11, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: and so what if we have some cracks

    You%u2019re welcome.

    Jul 7, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: and so what if we have some cracks

    The thing I specifically liked in the poem was you mentioning the human details.Like for example %u201CSometimes your lips are bit too chapped.%u201D But then you mention something positive about ...

    Jul 6, 2022
  • Art » Narrative, Lyrical Re: I Don’t Want To Let It Burn In The City Lights

    You%u2019re welcome! You too.

    Jul 2, 2022
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: carousel

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    Snow White was beautiful but lonely.She was kind-hearted but scared.She was young but worrisome.Nothing is as it seems.The Princess doesn’t have a perfect life.The castle isn’t always a paradise o

    Jun 30, 2022


Some people are hourglass shaped, some people are apple shaped, some people are pear shaped, some people are even bean pole shaped, but if we’re not careful we all become banana shaped. This is your gentle posture reminder.
— Ranger