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Re: Repent
Hello there, AJ! I'm Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today! I'm not sure how I feel about this one. It's quite repetitive at some parts, but some musical ...
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Re: Tactics in witty poetry
Hello there, Runner. I'm Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today! This is a very cute, unique poem. Well, perhaps 'cute' wouldn't be the right word for it, but ...
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Re: When you call a Guardian Angel...
Hi, Magic! I'm Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today. I'm not sure what to think of this. You said that it's a prologue? If so, it actually doesn't ...
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Re: Why Turn Away?
Hey, Jess! I'm Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today. First off, the subject of this poem is very good. It's very important and concerns more than just the ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Life, Heart and You.
Hello, Guilty! I'm Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today. The first thing I saw when I read this piece was the title. Yes, I know that's obvious, but ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: The Life She Wanted
Hi, Crazedasian! My name's Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today. First off, I'd like to welcome you to YWS. I absolutely love it here, and I hope that ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Give me Love
Hi there, Misstoria! Wow. This is an awesome poem! Although it was cliche in some ways, they were good ways, not tired ways, and that's a hard thing to do. ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Hope ch. 1
Hey, CS! I'm Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today! First off, I'd like to discuss your concept. It seems decent; writing about a girl recovering from an accident ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Dating Sucks
Hey Misstoria! I'm Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today! So, you went with a story about vampires, huh? Oh well. It's not my taste (Twilight ruined it for ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: I am The Unseen One's daughter, you are Death himself.
Hello there, Spark! I'm Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today! Hmm. I'm not sure how I feel about this one. There are some elements that I love about ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: It has been a long journey; at last, I have arrived.
Hello there, Enzo! I'm Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today! First off, welcome to YWS. I hope that you like it here as much as I do! There ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Fighting Temptation
Hello there!! Now this is adorable! As a fellow chocolate lover, I can completely sympathize with you. I loved the way you wrote it; it was charming because it seemed ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Life Goes On
Hello there, Deanie! All in all, this poem was okay. I understood the feelings you conveyed. But, frankly, this poem just didn't seem special. I have no idea how many ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Human Pain
Hi, SweetEyes! Welcome to YWS! I hope that you like it here as much as I do. There are so many incredibly talented writers on here, and they're very friendly! ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: losing shadows, setting fires
Hello there! I'm Rose, and I'll be reviewing this piece today! I'm not going to lie; your poem sort of put me in a trance. The imagery you used is ...
Nov 27, 2011
