crazedasian1

Since, the other reviewers before me corrected your grammar and tone of your poem, I really have no other advice to give you besides the line " I don't know ...

First off, this was purely amazing. The emotion drips from your words and the imagery really captivated me. Wonderful job! The only advice I could offer is for this stanza,instead ...

Wow, this is beautiful!I could really feel the emotion from your words. Just be careful with your punctuation. I am not sure if you like to put periods at the ...

I really loved this because I think everyone can connect with the topic. You really grasped the topic and extended it to make us think more about procrastination. Just be ...

I really enjoyed this, the description were spot on and created a vivid image in my head. As for mistakes, watch your grammar and edit carefully. Don't just throw words ...