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Re: Waiting for never
I think it's fabulous, the rhymes fit perfectly, and it flowed very well. I think you captured the sound of a clock to the "T". You did, however, have a ...
Oct 25, 2011 -
Re: elephant parade
I aboslutely love it! And not just because it's about elephants. It flowed very nicely and the rhymes were perfect. I thought that it was an amazing poem. You showed ...
Oct 25, 2011 -
Re: A Series of Events
Yeah, I disagree with you there. I think that it's amazing, then again I haven't read your other poems. But I think you are fantastic. I know you question the ...
Oct 23, 2011
