cottoncandybunny

Wow. Just wow. This story was absolutely breathtaking. You left me in suspense wanting more. I really like how you used a variety of words. You might want to build ...

This was a wonderful poem. I can't say I read poems much and I also don't know much about poems. I think you made a pretty good poem and I ...

Well. This was a interesting story to read. It's a bit random. T would be better if you clarified some parts of the story. The middle is a good place ...

Well. I thought this story was a quite interesting story. I found it to be a bit too fast for me, but the humor is excellent! Every sentence in there ...