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Heya! I'm not going to do a proper review, or anything, but... this is really, really, good. Or at least, it is in my opinion. :) I love the way ...

Wow. Okay, I thought this was amazing. Really, really, really good. I like to keep an eye on the fantasy forum, because it is my favourite genre. When I came ...

Oooh! I like this - I've just read all the chapters that you've posted, and I love it!Violet is really intriguing, and I want to know what's happening. One thing ...

Hi! I read through both the prologue and the first chapter. The way the prologue was written was very powerful and conjured some wonderful imagery in my mind. I like ...

This is great - keep writing! I loved it and I couldn't take my eyes off of the screen. I didn't see any awkward sentences or any obvious spelling mistakes ...

This is okay, but there a lots of things you need to work on. It all happened on the 9th of December 1992 . T he air was freezing and ...

Wow, this is great. I love it and can't wait to read more. It has good storyline and good descriptions. I find the idea the Kara "tastes" colours really interesting ...

WoW! This is amazing! I love it! I've just started reading the first few chapters in this story, and I couldn't stop reading. I'm just stunned by this bit, it's ...

Again very good. Like the last part, you need to add some full stops and commas. You also need to add some speech marks. You might want to add some ...

Well done! This is good. You just need to edit a few things (PrettyCrazy pointed them out) but other than that its great, making me want to read more. In ...

Hi. This is quite good and I liked it. Here's a few Nitpicks: was blossoming . J ust jump in its harmless, it will carry you to safety. Madeline asked ...

This is great! Loved it. The only thing was: Josette LaVie crossed over to where the iron cannonball lay This was in the third or fourth paragraph, and to me ...

Hey! This is amazing, I really enjoyed it! I didn't notice any obvious spelling mistakes, and I don't have time to search really hard. I agree with CaitlinGrant that your ...

I think it's great so far, but it would be helpful if there was more description. "Farah Loughton." She blinked. Ms. Gorges was glaring behind her thick-framed glasses. "Stand up. ...

Okay, here goes my second review. I think it's a great story line and there's just one or two things which you must have not seen when going over your ...