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Re: There are monsters under my bed
That was really fun to read. It had a good rhythm to it, but it was not very original compared to others. To make it really stand out and be ...
Mar 23, 2008 -
Re: The Man at Station Four
This was wonderful. I loved it. I could not stop reading. I am curious about whether he is a real ghost or whether he is more metaphorical, though... perhaps that ...
Mar 21, 2008 -
Re: Grace:
That was very good. I have not read your first poem, but this seems to be working for you. There is great imagery, but some of the word usage was ...
Mar 21, 2008 -
Re: I think
I really liked the idea for that poem. It definitely showed the business of going insane! It was very simple, so it had very little depth to it. It would ...
Mar 21, 2008 -
Re: Lady of the Lockers
Wow. That definitely let your opinion show. The beginning was rather difficult to follow as the words did not flow as smoothly as they have the potential to. Once I ...
Mar 21, 2008
