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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: There are monsters under my bed

    That was really fun to read. It had a good rhythm to it, but it was not very original compared to others. To make it really stand out and be ...

    Mar 23, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Man at Station Four

    This was wonderful. I loved it. I could not stop reading. I am curious about whether he is a real ghost or whether he is more metaphorical, though... perhaps that ...

    Mar 21, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Grace:

    That was very good. I have not read your first poem, but this seems to be working for you. There is great imagery, but some of the word usage was ...

    Mar 21, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I think

    I really liked the idea for that poem. It definitely showed the business of going insane! It was very simple, so it had very little depth to it. It would ...

    Mar 21, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Lady of the Lockers

    Wow. That definitely let your opinion show. The beginning was rather difficult to follow as the words did not flow as smoothly as they have the potential to. Once I ...

    Mar 21, 2008


Maybe I should say something quote-worthy, like, I dunno... "You can only be happy if you decide to be happy?"
— Necromancer14