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Re: Rose Petal Liquid
That was depressingly beautiful. I like how, for the first part of it, you made the last word of a sentence begin the next sentence. It really helped it flow. ...
Jul 9, 2011 -
Re: Not Another Twilight Parody!
*Here we go again* Explosive. Underscore. Pen.... That was *dramatic pause* amazing. I'm such a Twerd, and I loved it! Keep on keepin' on. You're so talented and funny. Your ...
Aug 1, 2009 -
Re: Legend's Hollow
Good job, peanut. Gold Star. Yeah, you did have a lot of grammar mistakes, but I really don't want to point them out. By the way, did you figure out ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: The New Guy
More that expected, you're really a nice guy. I like the way you talk to me, the way you say goodbye. Hey, Bailey. I think that this stanza could go ...
Dec 17, 2008 -
Re: past ( working on the title)
Hey... language problem!!! I can't believe you! You never said that you would put it in there. But hey, I guess that's high school. Speaking of language, I think you ...
Dec 13, 2008