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Thanks, Tikaya! And good to know it doesn't come across as discouraging victims *Thumbs up*

Thanks, creeperfeverdreams! And glad to still see you around!

Tysm!

Thank you, your feedback means a lot!

You're right, I should try to make the beginning clearer. Ty for reading and reviewing!

Tysm!

Thanks so much for reading and pointing all those things out! And yeah, that Tom Perez case is a tragedy :'')

Ofc, I'm happy to come back and review! :D Lmk if you want help looking for more places that can be trimmed! I get the same problem with writing, I ...

Sure, I'd be happy to read version 2 and see what changes were made! I probably won't leave a review on every chapter like I did the first time, but ...

(Also, funny how we're sending so many thank yous back and forth, haha- appreciation exchange!)

Ahh, I see I see. That is very interesting that it's a combination of Mikel and Shiko's names :0 Aww, tysm too, Kaia!

Tysm for the review, Aku! Those are some really insightful things you just said, and I really enjoyed hearing your take on the poem's imagery. And yea, seems like I ...

Tysm for the review!

Yw!! And yeaa, it's definitely been a while. T-T It makes me happy every time I log on and see the YWS community still going strong, though! Hoping to be ...

Not a full review, but this is beautiful and so sad-- I love the imagery and the message at the end. Such a heartwrenching twist and it conveys so much ...