confusnow

The whole thing draws me in. The first line almost forces me (good thing) to read on to see why there is no hope. You could either turn this into ...

Stanzas are a good idea. Thank you.

Is this a good title? Can anyone think of a better one? Titles are not something I'm usually good at, and for some reason the description didn't show up.

You could call the longer one "two empty mugs," but I don't know what you'd call the first one.