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Maybe. But this is kinda fan fiction. I don't know if I put this in that section. I thought I did. And it's only chapter one. Tony and McGee are ...

Mizzle: Thank you. and that was also my favorite part of my poem. And i will try to make it more, imaginary. BenFranks: Thank you also. Short ones that pack ...

Thank you, and I guess that I could try to make the meaning more significant. Try being the key word. I'm more better at writing stories because I can make ...

ab5986: Thank you too. I went back and fixed number 2. And tried on 1. lol, I can't tell if it's any better. Thank you for reviewing and likeing my ...

antimelrose: No, thank you for telling me what I did wrong or could use some improvement on. I spent a few hours on this( I don't know why) and kept ...