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Wow! I've read a few of your poems here and there and this one is definitely my favourite. Great work :)

Thanks for the review :]

Thanks for the review! Though I'd have to disagree about the capitalization. I think the best part about poetry is that it doesn't really have any rules. I love the ...

hahahaha no no it's my fault

thanks for the review :]

Thanks for the review!

I dig this. I do think it could be enhanced with punctuation, but the line breaks were placed well enough that it isn't a huge issue. Nice work

oh man haha, do I ever feel dumb now

hey, thanks for another review. I was thinking more along the lines of the idea that the microscope and the telescope both magnify things and take a closer look at ...

Thanks for the review! I actually don't know who Beowulf is, maybe you could link me to some of his stuff so I could check it out? Don't know how ...

heh, I giggled

Thanks for the review! Maybe I was addressing you in the poem, who knows right ;)

Hey thanks for taking the time to review them both :) you rock. I was just curious as to why you prefer the first version to this version?

Thanks!

I think I like that it's hard to interpret. Where the lines come from isn't really the point of the poem, but thanks for the suggestions! (: