confetti

I actually read this a while ago but never got around to reviewing it. Sorry about that, but I don't have much to comment on. The only issues I would ...

I turn my trot into a gallop and begin sprinting down the stairs. The horse imagery really needs to be put to an end. Neigh I wasn't really looking for ...

My thoughts are probably going to be all over the place, so bear with me. I'm just gonna write things down as I read it so here it goes: I ...

My thoughts are probably going to be all over the place, so bear with me. I'm just gonna write things down as I read it so here it goes: I ...

some nitpicks~ When words causes doubt, a camera provides evidence. *cause I’ve known this for what seems my entire life. for what seems (like) my entire life That change isn't ...

It was funny like. I would rephrase There was nothing to really nitpick, so I'm just gonna give an overall review: The writing is interesting, but I don't think it's ...

I'm going to be honest in this review - take everything I say as constructive criticism. I hope I don't offend you in any way, it's not my intention. Also, ...

I can't deny that this is a unique way of telling the story. But what I can say is that I don't think it's working. Like the last chapter, I ...

I know I've said this before in a previous review, but I really think this story is taking a turn for the unrealistic. The bits of emotion that you portray ...

I'm not a huge fan of this. Mostly because of where it is in the book. I don't really think this deserves its own chapter, especially this far into the ...

You start out nearly every chapter with a description of scenery. As well-written as it is, it gets old fast. A reader's favourite part is almost never description of scenery. ...

I feel bad for doing this, but I don't really have anything to critique. I don't see any errors in this whatsoever, you've really done a good job. The only ...

My breathing was intermittent, my heart rate exceeding its sustainable tempo of normalcy I don't exactly know how to say this, but this sentence is almost too much. The word ...

Here, as promised. The nightmare was simple, but complex in its own way Eh.. don't contradict yourself here. Either it's simple or it's complex. I get what you're trying to ...

I'll admit, I was reading this, thinking about how cliche it was beginning to sound. But then I got to the end and I changed my mind. I'm actually looking ...