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Roots rose from the frozen water like hands on a clock that had come to rest with the sudden freezing of the water, Er ... what? It doesn't make sense. ...

Actually, he's the hunter, and one of the two main characters. Thanks for your input, I'll most likely apply your first editing suggestion.

Thanks for the useful review! I recently got like 5 more poetry ideas to do tonight, but I'll definitely consider writing another pieced based upon the last few lines of ...

It paints a nice picture for sure, I felt it could've been more personal, more emotional. But it isn't bad at all! I was emotionally hurt enough at the time, ...

Wow, thanks James. I think you went a little far with analyzing it, but that's good. I like that someone is actually taking my imagery into mind. :) I like ...

I love the rain, therefore I like this poem. Good job. -Shear (Sorry for being unhelpful but when I see a poem I like, I have to at least comment ...

This poem is really .. beautiful. It seems like you find comfort and serenity in the rain. I like that. The rain restores and renews things. I do indeed love ...

Thanks guys. I appreciate it. :)

@Silented1: It's more of a metaphor. It'd be too hard to explain it, lol.

:D Welcome. I had fun, reviewing it, actually -.^ Ha, well, I'm glad. :D

Thanks for your comments and suggestions. I'll take them into consideration before my next post. :)

Wow, there's a lot of grammatical errors in that one... I normally don't write about this kind of stuff, so that's why it's so scratchy. I disagree with a lot ...

*Moved to General Fiction!* Thanks. :)

Thanks Amanda, I appreciate your support :) . You're very good yourself, don't forget. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Oh, and actually I think I wrote this ...