cocoboy

Hey everyone, Thanks so much for all the great feedback and support! I am working on chapter one, but it has been taking longer than I expected to write it, ...

Anyone like the name Jared? Or does anyone have it? That's what I'm considering, but I'm not sure... Yeah, that's the name I'm going to use for the first draft ...

Thanks everyone for all your great reviews! I'll write the 1st chapter soon. If your story takes place in the real world, then involving Shakespeare is okay, but if the ...

Hmm. I like. Maybe you should show the main character through the beggining more. You could keep the same idea but describe through words more about him besides the fact ...

This is a good start to a story, but there are some errors. First of all, you have to capitalize several things such as this: we looked around. Also, you ...

This is a good start to a story, but there are some errors. First of all, you have to capitalize several things such as this: we looked around. Also, you ...