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hmmmm well this is.....interesting....... i think that....well, no thoughts really.... i guess its a good poem but sorta strange......really strange.....good try though.....

the meaning is a little confuzing but thats how i like to write. you have to think about it..... and give it your own personal meaning. to me it means, ...

im not sure that "green wet lawn" fits but i was sorta strapped for ideas

wow. that's actually decent. i totally agree with mark's blanket of snow thing... it sounds too comforting. i think you described her death really well, and, unlike mark i don't ...

Yay Mark!!!! Good job. that was pretty cool. Write more!

bammm! :D