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wow..... that's really good. i'm not sure exactly what your talking about but when i read that poem i LOVED it! I think, like Joce, the ending is really good. ...

Very nicely written! I too really like this one. I think it makes a really good mental picture, maybe one that's a little different for everyone. -Through the window's glass, ...

nice writing. I think it is a little vague to be about the worlds problems. thats such a deep topic it's almost like your being a little too non serious. ...

good job.... :smt001 that was a little weird, but hey, whats new with you twinzies. :smt064 i think next time you might want to try having a subject... oh well ...

That would make an amazing song! -You're moaning like you're really hurting, your tiny heart, you say, it's breaking, we both know that's a lie!- great lyrics! I love your ...

wow. that's actually decent. i totally agree with mark's blanket of snow thing... it sounds too comforting. i think you described her death really well, and, unlike mark i don't ...

hmmmm...... until i read the first comment i had no idea that the first paragaph was supposed to be a dream....=-/ i definately think it sets up a good beginning ...