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  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: The Last Episode

    Thanks! I binge-watched the last season of LOST last summer. It was exhausting, which is what I wanted to portray in this story. :)

    May 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Cotton Candy

    Thanks! Realistic is what I was going for!

    May 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Cotton Candy

    *blushes* Thank you thank you thank you!

    May 18, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: prologue

    No problem!

    May 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Other, Narrative Re: The Mask

    Thanks, thundereagle! Yes, that was a message I was going for, although it can be interpreted in a variety of ways. :) I wrote this with a specific interpretation in ...

    May 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: The Last Episode

    Haha, thanks. I don't quite have the binge-watching stamina that my character has, but I know the feeling, which is why I wrote it! :) Thanks so much!

    May 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: The Last Episode

    Thanks! Sometimes I feel that too much description is... blah, while too little makes it boring. I'm working on finding that happy medium for myself :) Thanks for reviewing! I'm ...

    May 12, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: The Last Episode

    Thanks for the advice! Description seems to be a recurring problem for me. I'll keep this in mind next time I write!

    May 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Love is War

    Okay, thanks for letting me know. I can never tell. :D

    May 11, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Cotton Candy

    I made a fairly subtle change indicating that it was a rollercoaster. :)

    May 11, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Cotton Candy

    Can do! Thanks for letting me know!

    May 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: The Last Episode

    Thanks. I'll be sure to fix the things you pointed out :)

    May 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Cotton Candy

    Really? I actually consider myself to be wordy, although maybe that's just with homework :P Thank you so much!!!!

    May 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Cotton Candy

    Thank you for the review! I came up with the "someone else" thing from a Calvin and Hobbes comic that I read a long time ago but I always remembered ...

    May 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Cotton Candy

    Wow, thanks so much! I love the food metaphors, although I absolutely despise ketchup. But you had no way of knowing that :) Now I'm hungry, though. Shall I make ...

    May 10, 2014


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