claire72

I really enjoyed this. It kept me very interested. I like how you showed the times at the beginning of the paragraphs. I could really picture the whole thing in ...

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I love this poem so much. I love the mix of languages in it. The wordplay in this is great and everything flows together very very nicely. There is some ...

I'm sure it's great. Keep up the good work!

Ok claire72 here… Love love loved the poem! There was some minor mistakes but they have already been pointed out in other reviews. So I would just like to say ...

Nice song, just to point out it says "Wingardium leviosa make things fly" and I'm not sure if you meant to say "makes". Nice song overall and good humor *thumbs ...

Thanks for the review i'll "totally" take all of this into consideration