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Hmm I'll have to check out "Audition". Sounds interesting. Thank you for reading and for your nice comments haha. I'm glad the end surprised you.

Thanks so much :).

She is supposed to be wearing gloves%u2026I should state that in the story. Thanks for reading :)

Haha I bumped it up to 18 plus, thank you for the suggestion and for reading my story :). I'm sorry if it disturbed you.

Hello! You're too kind, thank you so much for your feedback. I went back and fixed all the errors you pointed out and my story flows 100 times better now. ...

It is quite dark, haha. Thank you so much for your feedback though. You really saved me with the dialogue comment. I read through the story again and cringed at ...