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The tension is real. You really captured a true dreamscape. Where things only just barely make enough sense, yet you don't question it. Where you have no control. How as ...

I do enjoy retelling of fairy tales. This one is especially good in my opinion. My only comment would be to clarify when she is told of the beauty of ...

I really like this concept. Though I don't know if the reasoning given for the people who want the man dead are believable. Unless they are perceived slights and the ...

I like this piece.There is something so overwhelming about how you pose your questions about the universe. And something so comforting in that last line. Even the last stanza. I ...

Hello. This piece is very thoughtful and intriguing. I really like the symmetry of the poem. Kind of like a person getting overly excited asking questions before actually finding the ...