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  • Script » General, General Re: Smile

    Yeah, I know what you mean. It just makes it creeper that there’s a thunderstorm going on out there tonight. All I noticed was for creeper to be creepier* Other ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Wish

    I just found a few small errors I wish all the laughter at my humore woukd still be there for woukd just to be would and for humore i'm not ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: The American Dream- Chapter 3

    I love the variety of words your used to describe everything in this chapter. I really hope you finish the story because the sample of it above is great! The ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Work in Progress?

    I really liked all of the lyrics :) The rhyming seemed to flow well. My favorite lines are You never knew how I felt about you Because you never knew, ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dance

    I love this poem! It is really creative and the words you used really draw me in. I really agree with everything your poem is about and think you expressed ...

    Jun 25, 2011


Daddy Long Legs are more closely related to crabs than spiders and somehow the idea of crablike creatures with spider legs that have escaped the entrappings of the primordial sea and now crawl over land and can walk up and down walls and ceilings creeps me more than I can adequately describe.
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