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Re: Smile
Yeah, I know what you mean. It just makes it creeper that there’s a thunderstorm going on out there tonight. All I noticed was for creeper to be creepier* Other ...
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Re: Wish
I just found a few small errors I wish all the laughter at my humore woukd still be there for woukd just to be would and for humore i'm not ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: The American Dream- Chapter 3
I love the variety of words your used to describe everything in this chapter. I really hope you finish the story because the sample of it above is great! The ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Work in Progress?
I really liked all of the lyrics :) The rhyming seemed to flow well. My favorite lines are You never knew how I felt about you Because you never knew, ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Dance
I love this poem! It is really creative and the words you used really draw me in. I really agree with everything your poem is about and think you expressed ...
Jun 25, 2011
