cityofdragons

I am completely speechless. I wish I could've written something like this, but I don't think I could have put it as perfectly as you did! I really liked it, ...

The only thing i felt was wrong with it was that it seemed sort of childish. It didn't flow very nicely too. (I hope I'm not seeming to harsh) I ...

I thought that some of the lines didn;t flow as well as they could, and you spelled or wrong. (ore) You do have a point though and I really enjoyed ...

I agree with empresssofttheuniverse. I did however, like the discription and the plot. I need to know more though. I need even more discription hidden in the writing. It was ...

This is really cool! I can't wait to see more! I had some trouble reading it though because you had a few typos and said some weird things in it ...

I really enjoyed this piece! I really liked the part where he says he better be treaten you right. That means he cares about her. It was really sad but ...

Even though description wasn't used in this rough-rough draft, I liked it a lot. I want to see what world they're in. It seems like a magical world caught in ...

I absolutely loved this. It was cute and I liked the little sayings like "What the gumdrop." I really loved the characters! They were so likable and I really got ...

I really enjoyed this. It was an interesting poem and I could feel the emotion flowing out of the poem. It was really interesting and I liked how you put ...

I was confused. I got what you were saying and all, but every time I read this, I got confused. I think you should do a little work on it, ...

I really enjoyed this! I want to know what else is going to happen in the story, and its pulling me in, unlike most stories. So far the plot line ...

It was sad, but I got lost in the first paragraph. I ddn't know in the first place who was talking. I also saw you spelled something wrong. It said ...

I am loving this poem more and more, every time I read it. I like the part when you introduce the girl in the setting. I can just feel everything ...

I agree with him. It is too short for a beginning. I'm interested, but I'm not completely hooked. I need more :D. Keep writing your story! I wanna hear more!

I have to say it was really good, but i got lost through some of it. I need to know more about Cannibals, Enigma, Stolen, etc. Were they in war? ...