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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Murder By Starlight (Part 6 - The Dramatic Conclusion)

    Oh, I'm really happy I have so much free time and spend it reading past reviews. BECAUSE, I'm not sure why I assume you would know this, but I planned ...

    Feb 8, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Set Adrift (Part 5)

    Okay, okay, okay, I totally get your confusion for the majority of this so let me try to explain it away in a comment. There's a lot of backstory I ...

    Feb 7, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Murder By Starlight (Part 4)

    So, I can't tell if this makes me a better or worse writer, but a lot of the stuff you've asked questions about or posed musings about is explained in ...

    Jan 24, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Set Adrift (Part 4)

    To address those couple questions; people drink lendur as a show of strength, sort of like tattoos or competitive boxing. It's like proclaiming to everyone "I am the best at ...

    Jan 20, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Set Adrift (Part 4)

    Thanks for the review! I'm a bit confused by your review because Ed doesn't have an accent. Dave is British and Quaz is VERY Southern, so maybe you just mixed ...

    Jan 17, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Set Adrift (Part 1)

    Thank you so much for the review! The reason the Condor is referred to as it and she is because I originally wrote this calling her "it" and then remembered ...

    Jan 15, 2021
  • Other » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Gallus Gallus Domesticus-For The Love Of Chicken!

    Might we be permitted to ask; why?

    Jan 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: The definition of a poem

    The pace of this poem reminds us of a limerick, the greatest form of poetry. We also appreciate the honesty of those who wrote the last time. This is a ...

    Jan 12, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Murder By Starlight (Part 3)

    I totally get the confusion because I wrote all of the chapters to build off one another so to get most of what's going on, you would have needed to ...

    Jan 12, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Murder By Starlight (Part 6 - The Dramatic Conclusion)

    I totally get your confusion about Dave being British. I basically finished the story and then realized I included ZERO description of my three main characters (so fair warning, in ...

    Jan 10, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Murder By Starlight (Part 5)

    Also, no, I'm really not getting tired of them! I really appreciate them because I thought the story got lost in the annals of YWS.

    Jan 9, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Murder By Starlight (Part 5)

    To address the last part about Ed's F.P.U. mark, I'm intending on going into greater detail in a future story, but for now, the idea is that he kept it ...

    Jan 9, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Murder By Starlight (Part 3)

    I wholeheartedly agree with you on the pacing. Like I told Zoom, I quickly realized I don't have the patience to write murder mysteries. The pacing is off because I ...

    Jan 5, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Murder By Starlight (Part 2)

    Thank you so much! I really thought that the whole story was kind of...completely terrible, because I actually don't like mysteries, but apparently, it's not! That's so nice!

    Jan 3, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Murder By Starlight (Part 2)

    To address the first two things, I'm pretty certain I wrote it like that because I don't really have the patience for writing mystery books and I only had a ...

    Jan 3, 2021


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