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personally, i like the OMG. it adds to her personality. because i know its not just how you type because you spell everything else out. i like it. but yeah, ...

well, dangg. im super glad her dads getting better. it always takes something big to get them to realize it. becauase at first i hated him, but yay [x i ...

oh wow...this is really...wow. i mean wow in a good way! most definatly. its just really sad. i think killing the boy might've been a little much, but that might ...

oh my gosh! this made me laugh, gahh, this is amazing. i love how you write about something more different than everyone else. its shows your uniqueness [sp?] cant wait ...

okay, im not a very good crituquer and i found nothing to critique. but woah, this grabbed my attention immediatly. very good , yeah. it doesnt make sense yet bu ...