christithething

This is a very descriptive story and I really like it. This really shows the "show not tell" thing, you did very well. I how you described the way he ...

This was a beautiful story and the ending was just so sad. I love Mei she is so brave, nice, and courageous. The whole story seemed like it was planned ...

I really love this story and all of the characters. Su and Diaoyu were very bright and cheerful, I like that they were brave enough to run away, I wish ...

Great story, I love the characters and how you describe them. The plot was very easy to understand and very nice and short. I wish we could have read a ...