christalynnalice

I liked it a lot, two things though. You say "he" and"his" a lot, and seeing as this is a piece about fallen angels, I'm assuming you mean God or ...

Flash by for a moment(Even shorter, I mean) An instant (perhaps) Stepping Toe to toe with their fate. This line confused me a bit, it took me several times reading ...

wow...just wow. I was raised in the church of God all my life, and this piece really stunned me, it's what a lot of people are thinking, what I've been ...