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mmmmmmmmmmmkay. I's back. Several days later. (& I knew you were Gud, Wozzel) First: piepiemann2: "overall" is one word. Not two. It has never been two. It was probably a ...

*squee* I love that! I would like it if you expanded it a little more, especially his realization of what GOd wants from him, that part was a little jumbled.

*phew* That would have been really really nasty... I was a little bit scared of you for a moment there... :P

I knew it was something like that, but then I thought it was eclipse...I decided not to embarrass myself too much. :D Thanks!

No problem. I am the Grammar Nazi. :D And, I forgot to say it, but I really like the first stanza. It sounds good in my head (which is a ...

Thank you. The contest is explained above. You write the opening chapter of a story, and, if you win (which I didn't), other people write the subsequent chapters. So it ...

Thanks... I didn't want to give it any organization, that's how the words came out of my head (after watching over 75% of my friends perform in the last three ...

Sorry, it got messed up when I pasted it in.

I remembered something that bothered me! "Carlile" is actually spelled "Carlisle." Unless you've seen it that way somewhere else, I suggest you change it. It looks really wierd. And you ...

*growls again* Okay the competition can be found at: You write a chapter, submit it, rate other chapters, the best five get picked (they've already been picked, I was not ...

*growl* no. :cry:

Grazi. I know, the accent got repetitive, but it was for a British contest, none of them would know what I meant by "Southern accent," I was trying to make ...

Ahem. Aet: Girls: Love chocolate. Get periods. Admit they have heartbreak. Share their feelings. Drown their sorrow in chocolate. Guys: Like chocolate. Think a period goes at the end of ...

:D I am a grammar Nazi...I point out grammar mistakes no matter what (okay, I make exceptions for stilistic effects :) ). It bothers my friends sometimes, but they know ...