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Okay! I'm back on your request. *Goes to read* *Comes back* That was... amazing! I only read the last bit, but I sat there, transfixed on the screen. It was... ...

In year 7 we had to read book called Galax-Arena. It was totally random and confusing and just made me think: Why are we studying this in school ?

Yay! The second part is up! The first thing though, it's not double spaced, which makes reading it very annoying. Reckon you could double space it, just for me? Now, ...

I'm hoping to read all of her books, because I really liked MOTOE. Esme, she wrte six romance novels you know? Under a different name that I can't remember right ...

Just watched it! It was really good, but the sound was a bit annoying t times. But oh well, I read it before, anyway. And I can always read it ...

So... what's a senior? And what's this line supposed to mean? Too bad I'm the want- to- be-er. Yeah... I've got no idea what a senior is.

Another great episode. I think I'm starting to get the plot, and I'm looking forward to finding out what's going to happen. But, what's lube? Is it American or something, ...

I liked this. I got a bit of a tune going on it, and I thought it was a little different from a lot of popular music, but still close ...

I'm ba-ack!!! The ladder, shuddering; I don't understand this bit I think it should be, The ladder shuddered; over his- calculating green eyes Why the -? It really eems to ...

I open my bedroom door and peer inside, making sure no one's in there. I see a small pile of clothes on my bed. New clothes-bought by Mom. Why does ...

Okay, now for chapter 2 and 3! And it opens with a clang. I peer inside, discovering that the contents of my locker have been disturbed. Nice. Was the nice ...

I had dozed off, as unlikely as that sounds. I woke as the door slid open. Unlike at my house, I was alert right away. These sentences seem very disjpined. ...

Okay, so I'm back. Where did I leave off? Okay, let's go! Writing set me free. It was the truest part of me, the purest, rawest expression of my thoughts ...

I have now read: My Sisters Keeper Change of Heart Plain Truth The Tenth Circle Keeping Faith I love all of them to bits. I have another four of her ...

Yep, this is a novel. 14 chapters! Thank you so much for your critiques. I can't edit right now, but I should be able to soon. You're right about the ...