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This was very different from Dear Diary. So why did April kill herself? I like it how you've got Jo writing letters to her dead friend. I'm not sure if ...

This was interesting and really funny. I don't really get why everyone hates her, she seems to just a normal girrl, but whatever. I liked it. It's coll how you ...

Generally speaking, I liked this story, but I did notice some things: The great force of the wind almost thrust Isabella over the edge of the cliff I don't really ...

Have you been eavsdropping on the girls in my school?? Tut, tut. You bad person. But seriously, you have captured the 'bitchy teenage girl' thing soooo well. The only thing ...

This was beautiful. Sad, but beautiful. It made me was to cry. I love your description of winter and the snow. You make it sound lovely. 'Crystal never knew eyes ...

Yay! This chapter was just for me! No one else read it, it's just for me! Anyway, this was really good. I love how she's different with her friends and ...

It was short and breif, which I thought made it really good and interesting. You only skimmed the surface. Going into detail may have ruined it. I think there was ...

I'm a christian and I was wary of reading the Harry Potter books at first, but after finsihing the first chapter, I was hooked. I'm now anxiously waiting for the ...

This was so exciting. But don't tell me it's the end? There's still so much more I think you could write! Will Jessica back down? Will the police come and ...

You evil person! I want to know what the letter says! Oh well, I suppose I'll find out soon enough. I still think the chapters need to be longer, and ...

Hey, I really enjoyed this story. There were some spelling and puncuation mistakes I saw, but overall it was really good. I love the plot, it's so engaging, and you're ...