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Very, very nice. It was very powerful and emotional, but not in a sad way. More in a strong way. I don't think this could be a piece by itself, ...

Nice. Now, lyrics aren't my strong point, but I tend to be quite harsh sometimes. Overall I liked it, but it was a little simple. The tune I put to ...

It was... interesting. I found it a little boring, but at the same time I liked it. Your main character (Emmett, or something, right?) is interesting. Mentally retarted, yes? I ...

Well, it was good in the first bit, but then I just got confused. How do they tie in together? R2D2 and C3PO Celebrities? Are these by any chance from ...

Haha! I used to love that song when I was younger. Now I can't stand it! I hate this song. I hate this song. Soooo funny! Unfortunately that song was ...

Yay! More JC. Hah, sorry, I'm bored. 1. What do you think so far? Is it moving along? Are you bored? 2. What about the characters so far? 3. I've ...

To be honest, this story was very boring. I'm not going to go through it all and tell you every little thing you did wrong, since Alainna pretty much covered ...

This was cool, but I'm a little confused. I guess it'll all be explained in the next episodes, which I now have to go and read. But it was cool. ...

Yay! Part three! They hug me until I can’t breath, they kiss me with their sticky lips, they cry in my hair. I'm pretty sure it's meant to be breathe. ...

I didn't connect to this piece in any way. I quite like learning about WW2, but this, as well as being quite boring and badly-written, was historically unaccurate. First of ...

I didn't spot any spelling or grammatical mistakes, but it was a bit simple. Intersting, but a bit simple and a little confusing. I liked the boy, but I think ...

Very, very nice. I liked this bit more than I liked part two. The flashbacks were interesting, espcially as they gave away everything, yet didn't ruin the story. “I think ...

This is really good. I'm not sure if I like it better than chapter one, they're both great. Again, you should probably work on your decription, but the emotion was ...

Nice. No mistakes or anything, but I have a couple of comments. They were all the school had been talking about for days. It took me many times to figure ...

Great story! I found no spelling mistakes nd such, so I'll just move straight onto my comments. attending a funeral in three days. This may be my inexperience with funerals, ...