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Re: Tainted Blood Ch.1 Part 1
I think it is a good start, but i think you should try Figurative Language. It is sort of boring to read and figurative language helps spice things up a ...
Aug 16, 2008 -
Re: Revising Hope, Chapter Un
So far, I absolutely love it. Its very mindblowing; it has that touch on a reader. The one I am refering to is this: it makes you want to know ...
Aug 16, 2008