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Re: Clinging Onto Perfection
Hey, I just stumbled across this and I really enjoyed it! I had a few thoughts while I was reading it, and I'm not sure if they'd help but I ...
Oct 31, 2008 -
Re: First Kiss
First off, I really liked this. :) But I noticed little things. They're not really important but I just thought I'd mention them. And yet it is the Catholic church ...
Oct 31, 2008 -
Re: I am Mentally Ill
I loved loved loved this, but there were some things that caught my eye. When she visited me in prison, her hair and eyes shone so brightly, the other prisoners ...
Sep 27, 2008 -
Re: Destinies Entwined-prologue
Hey! So I stumbled across this (obviously) and I really like the idea. XD I know it's a prologue and all, but there were just a few things I noticed ...
Sep 27, 2008
