cheez_burger

Wow. I want to be an actor here!!!!!!!!!!!! Cheez!

Sorry, redo. I can tell you that it was beautifully written. I loved the way you wrote it, and I really want an0other one to feast my eyes upon!

Speechless. That was brilliant. Do it again!! Cheez!

I just came back to read it again :)

Ah! I can't read this! Divide it into chapters! It's to long! *runs away screaming

Oh, Hawkie! This is the most beautiful thing I've ever read! Bravo, bravo! Encore! ~Cheez_Burger~

very nice. i love it. good job! "tears thick like blood..." i like it! 8)