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Howdy! Okay, so I really like the idea behind this piece, I found a couple quick grammatical fixes, but besides that the only suggestion I have is trying to exclude ...

Hey, there! I'm Shannon. I really liked you're piece, one of my best friends has a mild case of OCD, and I have a classmate with Autism who has touched ...

Okay, I liked it. The whole thing was cute and quirky-- just how I like my poetry! The only thing I have a problem with is that last paragraph, it ...

This was really cute. I never know what to say when reviewing poetry, because I think it's really just up to the poet, and I didn't see anything stand out ...

Okay, I know this sounds harsh, but this seems like it needs a lot of work. I only read the first few paragraphs, and everything was SO repetitive. I advise ...

This seems pretty cool. I'd like to see more of Glenn's quirky character, I always love that kind of stuff. I didn't catch any grammatical mistakes or anything, which I ...

Hoorah! First review! This was really good, though a bit short, I would like some more! The grammar seemed good, I didn't catch anything wrong. I didn't really catch anything ...

This is really great. It's a different approach to the classic story of "the loser." Those last few sentences were great. "The Loser would have liked to ask his parents ...

Mmm..loved it!! Chapter 2 My first instinct was to panic. My heart started thumping about in my chest, like a one-man army, . one-man army... great description! Reality grasped my ...

When I first read "The Perks of Being a Wallflower" I thought it was pretty weird. But now thinking back on it, I've slowly fallen in love with it. :) ...

Ohh, I liked this! It was different! It took me a minute at first to get that the beeps were the beeps of the whatchamacallit machine, but once I read ...

Hehe, I'm on a little reviewing kick here. The directions were simple, pee on the stick then wait ten minutes. If there was a minus sign, be happy, he didn't ...

Intense, suspenseful, and enthralling, what more could you ask for? Your descriptions were really great. I felt like I was right there, and I felt her desperation to get out ...

I am HOOKED! This is really, really, really fantastic writing. I can't really pick out a favorite spot to quote, but I love it. It's these kind of things that ...

Hiya! Sorry it took me so long to get over here and review this. I've had your PM sitting in my inbox far too long. Also, I didn't think that ...