chazzer

Thank you too everyone who reviewed my poem and thanks for the santaz's tips too.But, MHD that was really over-rated dude,seriously. i really felt this way.But to the others thanks ...

The forest was green and lush, bright, vivid colours I love the use of the rule of three here to describe the forest. Not many people can use this in ...

I am going to review this fully, I hope, I've never been so good at it:- A column of smoke coiled up from the ruins of Mariel to greet the ...

Great description here, I don't think that you need adding anything on because it puts a picture in the readers mind, I especially liked 'THE MAN LET HIS FINGERS CARESS ...