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Re: The saving light
Hello, my name is Colt, and I shall be reviewing you this evening. This piece was interesting. The flow was mostly okay. A thing I like to call punctuation was ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Born From Revenge
Hello! My name is Colt, and I'll be reviewing your story today. Now, I opened this because I seen that it what it was a fan fiction for. I love ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: Valentine
Hello, I'm Colt, and I will be critiquing your poem this evening. This poem was superb, I loved it. It was connectable, and flowed well. Like Rory, I was left ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: e
Hello, I'm Ryan, or Colt, as most usually call me now. Overall, I liked the piece. There was a clever use of stylistic devices. Pros +Lots of stylistic devices (Yay!) ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: Without Reservations
Hello! Nice to meet you! My name is Ryan, or Colt as most know me as. Sadly, I have not read this book yet, so it'll be interesting to learn ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: Lies
Hello, I'm Ryan, I will be reviewing your poem this evening. Everything has been picked apart. I'd advise though that you'd add punctuation. It helps the flow of reading, helping ...
Mar 8, 2009
