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  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: blushing with a shameful glow

    "Your poem is a good one, but I think somethings are wrong, while others are probably missing. I would like to let you know that when next you write, because ...

    Apr 15, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: blushing with a shameful glow

    how would a rework make it better if there is no specific critique for me to consider

    Apr 15, 2021


I love her dearly, but I can’t live with her for a day without feeling my whole life is wasting away.
— Miss Kenton, The Remains of the Day by Kazuo Ishiguro