charleslee

Hey there, I'm Charles and I'm here to review your poem. First off, I loved the structure of the poem. I thought it was really creative to put such contrasting ...

Hey there! I'm Charles and I'm here to review your story. You have a lot of great imagery here--a lot of words and phrases that are impressive and show a ...

Your poem was short, but nonetheless captivating. I thought that the brevity of the poem was appropriate and definitely left the reader with questions at the end. One critique I ...

Hey there! I thought this was a very interesting poem and I enjoyed deciphering the meaning. The first stanza was very well-done. I liked the map analogy a lot and ...

Hey, Charles here! Thought I'd return the favor with a review. I really like your writing style so far. I read through Chapter 1, but figured I'd leave Chapter 2 ...

Hey NerdTrash6000! You have a really good start here. I think that the characters are really interesting so far. One of the first things I noticed was the fact that ...

Hey WyvrynScribe! First off, here are some thoughts I wrote down as I was reading through the first time: - Maybe elaborate a little more on what you mean by ...

Hey JustPerks! First off, here are some things I noticed during my initial readthrough: - You did a good job setting up the characters in the first few sections. I ...