champ321

Hey man, I think, especially for your first book, that is an awesome start. I find writing in the first person is the easiest way to define your voice and ...

Wow, I'm sure you don't need to hear this, but your style and lyrical voice are truly exquisite. From both the third and first person point of views the description ...

Your story is particularly choppy, a lot of grammatical errors, and syntax errors; but that is general information and I don't want it to pull away from a seemingly very ...

Hey there! Great start. I have to be honest, I am not really into the really fanatical books. I like my main characters to have regular sized ears, haha. But ...