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Hi, Lucrezia! First off I want to say that I really like the premise of the story so far. It's a bit cliche but I think where you're going with ...

Hi, Kaity! I'd like to start off by saying that I completely agree with timmyjake. You have some excellent descriptions in there. The only grammatical errors were the two sentences ...

Hi, Lucrezia! I'm having trouble believing you wrote this when you were only thirteen because this is incredible haha, even for someone older. I couldn't find any major grammatical errors, ...

Hi JKReader, and welcome to YWS! I want to start off by saying that you have an amazing writing style. I love how descriptive you are, especially with Sarah in ...

Wow this is really striking. I had to finish the whole piece because I didn't catch on to exactly who the narrator is until the end. The was you personified ...

Okay I really like this. It's very well-written and there were only two things that caught my eye, grammar-wise. 'The road has been bumping in the hut.' Up to this ...

I usually don't get poetry, it's always been a really elusive writing style to me and I never understand it too well but I could definitely empathize with this one. ...

Wow this is really creepy haha. There was only one grammar error I found: "I love you more than I can bare! - E" 'bare' should be 'bear'. Other than ...