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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I Attempted a Poem in Spanish

    this is great! i personally don't speak spanish, but i translated it and so far it looks really good! just read chris' review and they've made comments on what i ...

    Nov 1, 2020


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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