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✶ taste of sun; seasons I forget to leave

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: THE SUN DOES NOT MEAN FOR YOU TO BE WARM

    hi! PLEASE don't apologise at all - you can't really fixate on 1 stanza or line when writing poetry so im glad you felt similarly reading and reviewing it! the ...

    Mar 21
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: STRANGE EQUILIBRIUM

    hey!! once again thank you 4 your review/s - you understood it really well and especially dug into the core of it!! the contradiction-finding-balance reading is exactly right. the crooked ...

    Mar 21
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: STRANGE EQUILIBRIUM

    hiya, thank you 4 your reviews on 2 of my pieces! i once again cannot respond as thoughtfully as i would like 2 right now but, im glad you enjoyed ...

    Mar 21
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: THE SUN DOES NOT MEAN FOR YOU TO BE WARM

    HEllo!! thank you so much 4 your review, can't respond as fully as i'd like atm but you've engaged with it meaningfully and that means a lot :) will get ...

    Mar 21
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Houseflies

    thank you 4 explaining your thought process!! brilliant job once again!!!

    Mar 21
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: LOGORRHOEA

    thank you!!!

    Mar 21
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: LOGORRHOEA

    thankyou corvid!!! all deliberate choices, im glad you noticed them :D

    Mar 21
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: LOGORRHOEA

    HIYA LIM!!! thank you so much 4 this review - genuinely among the most thoughtful i've received and i'm super grateful you took the time!! your reading of the poem ...

    Mar 21
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: LOGORRHOEA

    hello, thank you so much!!! this 1 is a pretty significant piece 4 me personally so knowing the imagery landed the way i intended is really wonderful 2 hear. i'm ...

    Mar 21
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 03.13.26 - saturate

    of course, this was great work! apologies 4 the tangent though ajsdkl;

    Mar 18
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: What I made of You (in the hours I could not sleep)

    HIYA ASH!! please don't sell yourself short, this was a really sweet review and i truly appreciate you :D i'm really glad the formatting helped!! had a lot of deliberation ...

    Mar 18
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: What I made of You (in the hours I could not sleep)

    HEY!! thank you so much 4 choosing my poem 4 the green room :D on the line breaks - your instinct's spot on there. every single 1 is intentional. the ...

    Mar 18
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: What I made of You (in the hours I could not sleep)

    hello corv!! thank you 4 your review, the time you've taken with it means a lot :) im really glad you liked the opening stanza!! it was possibly 1 of ...

    Mar 18
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: What I made of You (in the hours I could not sleep)

    TEXT VERSION: Both hands around the mug— the small genuflection of it. You smooth the same crease in your sleeve before you speak, which I have since made holy. I ...

    Mar 18
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Culture Re: The Devadasi’s Eavesdropper

    of course :) AHAHAh yeah, some of my family is ethnically indian and i have friends that are classical dancers, so i am familiar with the subject and this poem ...

    Mar 17


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