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Re: THE SUN DOES NOT MEAN FOR YOU TO BE WARM
hi! PLEASE don't apologise at all - you can't really fixate on 1 stanza or line when writing poetry so im glad you felt similarly reading and reviewing it! the ...
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Re: STRANGE EQUILIBRIUM
hey!! once again thank you 4 your review/s - you understood it really well and especially dug into the core of it!! the contradiction-finding-balance reading is exactly right. the crooked ...
Mar 21 -
Re: STRANGE EQUILIBRIUM
hiya, thank you 4 your reviews on 2 of my pieces! i once again cannot respond as thoughtfully as i would like 2 right now but, im glad you enjoyed ...
Mar 21 -
Re: THE SUN DOES NOT MEAN FOR YOU TO BE WARM
HEllo!! thank you so much 4 your review, can't respond as fully as i'd like atm but you've engaged with it meaningfully and that means a lot :) will get ...
Mar 21 -
Re: Houseflies
thank you 4 explaining your thought process!! brilliant job once again!!!
Mar 21 -
Re: LOGORRHOEA
thank you!!!
Mar 21 -
Re: LOGORRHOEA
thankyou corvid!!! all deliberate choices, im glad you noticed them :D
Mar 21 -
Re: LOGORRHOEA
HIYA LIM!!! thank you so much 4 this review - genuinely among the most thoughtful i've received and i'm super grateful you took the time!! your reading of the poem ...
Mar 21 -
Re: LOGORRHOEA
hello, thank you so much!!! this 1 is a pretty significant piece 4 me personally so knowing the imagery landed the way i intended is really wonderful 2 hear. i'm ...
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Re: 03.13.26 - saturate
of course, this was great work! apologies 4 the tangent though ajsdkl;
Mar 18 -
Re: What I made of You (in the hours I could not sleep)
HIYA ASH!! please don't sell yourself short, this was a really sweet review and i truly appreciate you :D i'm really glad the formatting helped!! had a lot of deliberation ...
Mar 18 -
Re: What I made of You (in the hours I could not sleep)
HEY!! thank you so much 4 choosing my poem 4 the green room :D on the line breaks - your instinct's spot on there. every single 1 is intentional. the ...
Mar 18 -
Re: What I made of You (in the hours I could not sleep)
hello corv!! thank you 4 your review, the time you've taken with it means a lot :) im really glad you liked the opening stanza!! it was possibly 1 of ...
Mar 18 -
Re: What I made of You (in the hours I could not sleep)
TEXT VERSION: Both hands around the mug— the small genuflection of it. You smooth the same crease in your sleeve before you speak, which I have since made holy. I ...
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Re: The Devadasi’s Eavesdropper
of course :) AHAHAh yeah, some of my family is ethnically indian and i have friends that are classical dancers, so i am familiar with the subject and this poem ...
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