celkin

Thank you :))

The stanzas actually were how I originally wrote it, but the format got messed up. I totally agree! Thank you for your awesome review :)

I definitely agree with the random pronouns, but I decided in the end to create a hodgepodge of culture without necessarily creating characters in the poem. Thank you for your ...

Thank you!

Thank you! I was trying to create a melting pot type of scene by just using little imagery snippets, but I really appreciate your review!

Thank you so much!!

I really enjoyed this poem! I love choppy writing where each line is a part of a sentence. This is how good poetry is written, in my opinion, with little ...

I loved this poem! The title really captured the essence of the poem, something I personally find really difficult to achieve. I agree with the previous comments talking about your ...