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true... @satira

i thought it was clearly Annabeth. It's based off of Series #1 book #4 Battle Of The Labryinth, when Percy is on Calypso's island, and noone knows where he is......

really? I thought i sounded harsh.. i actually wanted to apologize for being so harsh.. :)

welcome :) i hope to read more of your work!!

Thanks!! I'm honestly not sure as to whether or not i am going to continue or not.. i was thinking about making a diary entry for each character. In this ...

it wasnt discouraging at all!! the idea about the background was a good idea.. i didnt think of putting it in because Annabeth had no idea where he was. But ...

got it it was so good!!!!!!!

i like ellipsis so....

@pretzelsing it is AnnaBETH

yeah, this didn't help me.. i had numerous other people read it and they all got emotion.. and i had reasons for eerything that i did.. so yeah...

welcome :) you are an AMAZING writer! Can't tell you that enoguh times!

i dont see a reason to nit-pick.. just say there was nothing wrong with it.. aas there was nothing wrong with it

@goldflame all of the problems ou metioned seemed to be nit-picky things to me! How is it that 3 people find NOTHING wrong with it, but you manage to find ...

exaclty what i sid @attackoftheflash i couldn't find any errors!

well, some professors do things like this.. this is normal..