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Wow. This story is brilliant. At first nothing seems out of the ordinary, just another person preparing for 2012, with a little more seriousness than warranted, but as the piece ...

Interesting. It's sort of a peek into the life of regular person. The whole set-up is executed precisely, starting with the man's work, then going in deeper. The complexity, the ...

I enjoyed reading this piece. It flows well, there's not too much going on at once, but there's enough going on to keep the reader interested. One question, what does ...

I love the imagery of this piece. Having the hour-glass, already running out of time, but then having fissures in said hour-glass, really adds power to the image of destabilization. ...

This is very vivid piece. The details really extend the piece further into the depths of the mind. I can't relate to this piece, because I have yet to have ...

Really nice rhythm! Sounds kind of dark, or like you're preparing for something at the beginning. Whatever make that tinkling sound in the second part sounds awesome! The second part ...

I enjoyed this. I found this piece funny. It is a little silly, but since you wrote it like a fairytale, which are made for children, that's perfectly natural. Their ...

whoa, this really good! This poem flows amazingly well! Also, your diction creates a vivid picture of what's happening in the story.This poem is written beautifully, however, it fails to ...

oh wow! This is really great!I love the story this poem tells, and how you described yourself and your grandmother in the beginning, it really helps to create a mental ...

oh my. that is. So....saddening. This piece is so passionate, in a subdued way, it's not fiery, more like candle light. I love all the metaphors you use, and I ...

I'm sorry.....moving picture distracting me.....but I'm pretty sure this piece is better than the moving picture...pretty sure.... Anyway, this is a really nice piece!This story is well developed, but

This poem makes me......pensive. Not sad, but more thoughtful, reflective, I guess. You really get a full story from this poem, I can tell it was well thought out.This diction ...

this poem is...different. It's free verse and straight-forward, but that fits very well for this subject matter. I like the personification in these lines: I can hear it breathing, I ...

Haha, I don't quite get it! XD But I still feel laughter which makes it special! Humorous in a strange way....a lighthearted tone given to a solemn matter, fear, definitely ...

O la la! Very enticing poem!This poem exudes seductiveness!I can just picture it! This poem is very vivid, exuberant in its descriptions, without revealing too much. I don't know how ...