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thx azila! and dont worry about the character background. ive got that all figgered out!

thanx everyone! it has been edited! i am so glad that you liked it, i was a little 'iffy' idk y. well yay! i will begin the 6th chapter! thanx ...

ha ha you make me laugh. oh by the way, i have said this a million other places but imperial1scout is my brother!!!! yay!

ill try not to. by the way, imperial1scout is my brother! i believe i have said that a million other places but just so you know...

wow. i found no errors and honestly this was one of the best pieces of writing ive ever read. i cant even describe... wow.

40k! Yay!!! *does happy dance*slips and lands on butt*remembers she can't dance at all* you are welcome for the help! its only cuz i love this story so frikkin much! ...

k thanx everybody! its been edited

i dont have time for a long post right now so i'm just going to say that it was awesome and i can't wait for the next one! as always, ...

thanx for the crits everyone! im not much of a poet, i know. i always focus too much on the rhymes :P i may work on this later, but I'm ...

ha ha thanx bigbad! i saw the werewolf thing and hit myself on the head. smart me :D thanx for the reply you rock! :smt035 or should i say you ...

interesting and intriguing but as bigbad said, it did sound a lot like twilight. which can immediately shake readers off.

well i was describing him to be that way, kind of unhealthy looking so im sticking with sallow. thx for looking it up though. don't worry, the 3rd chapter is ...

hooooly crap. that was the most awesomest thing i have ever read. thanks alot bigbad how am i supposed to wait for the next part after that?! i mean... its ...

thanx! i think i will follow canislupis' suggestion and take out the bolds. next chapter coming soon!

ok i decided to put in my edited version of this chapter. here it is: Chapter 1 All was silent. Not the nice silence that makes you feel calm and ...