carino

I really like your poem. It's quite powerful. "Her mother's lust had made her come home broken too often. " This almost sounds...hm. Well, as if the "her" is referring ...

Holyohmygod. That was really good. The only thing I can think of that I'd like to see is a bit of description about the first two scars...where are they, what ...

James Patterson's Maximum Ride series. Those books broke my heart. Thing is, the idea's pretty good and the characters have room for some seriously interesting flaws, if only he'd bother ...