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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Temple by the Sea

    A very effective way to go about denouncing religion. Your descriptions of the temple are so thick and rich that you could cut them with a knife, which works really ...

    Oct 8, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Theokrone (A small excerpt from my fantasy novel debut)

    This seems to be inspired at least partly by Lovecraft's lush diction. I really can't tell you whether I liked this excerpt or not, mainly because I didn't understand most ...

    Oct 7, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Cane

    I did not expect the ending... I think I would have liked to see the narrator developed more as a character. The fact that there was a secretary already sort ...

    Oct 7, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Third Avenue

    I didn't think it started slow at all, myself. The mystique of the third lane captured me right away, and the strange events unfolding after that point only strengthened the ...

    Oct 7, 2010


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